【至急!!】 英語の時間に“私の宝物”をテーマにした スピーチをします。 原稿...

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2017.11.05 19:07

【至急!!】 英語の時間に“私の宝物”をテーマにした スピーチをします。 原稿を書いたので、添削してください! Hello! everyone. I tell you about my treasures. Please look at them! They were presents from my friends Ms.〇〇,Ms.〇〇,Ms.〇〇,Ms.〇〇 and Ms.〇〇 for my 〇th birthday! I use an appointment book and a back pack everyday. They are very easy to use. Look at this! This picture was drawn portrait by Ms.〇〇. I was so excited because it look like me! I like this cute and funny picture. And look at this! My favourite points of this backpack are nice design,light, and strong! So they are very important for me! Thank you for listening!

英語語学受験

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2017.11.05 19:09

7行目、どのものかは特定されているからan、aじゃなくて、theで良いと思う